Friday, June 19, 2015

Do it with a rock star.

Here's the latest revision of a chapter I wrote about Ramona and Anderson's first night together.  

**And, yes, I blush when I write about sex.  

Enjoy!


“Do it with a rock star.”


            Ramona looked around the large, dingy room she stood in.  It had cement-plastered walls and a three-foot-high stage against one side.  There were about fifty other people of mixed ages standing around talking and drinking from red Solo cups.  She had come with her cute, bubbly co-worker Amy. 
“Remind me why I’m here again?” Ramona asked, trying to avoid the stench of stale beer filling her nostrils.
            Amy smiled and wrapped her arm around Ramona’s shoulders.  “Because you’re the bestest girlfriend anyone could ask for,” Amy replied.  “And because you don’t want me to get murdered on the first online date I’ve ever been on.  The one that YOU talked me into going on, by the way.”
            Ramona winced.  “Oh, that’s right.  I really need to learn to keep my mouth shut.”  They both laughed.  “What’s the name of this guy’s band again?” she asked.
            “Turn Up,” answered Amy before taking a long sip from her red cup.
            “Like the vegetable?”
            “No, like ‘turn up’…the music, I guess.”  Amy shrugged.  “You know everyone has to be clever these days.”
            “Clever, indeed,” replied Ramona.
            Just then, the house lights came down and the band started walking onto the stage, picking up their instruments.
            “That’s him!” shouted Amy.  “That’s Dylan.”
            “Ooh, Mama like!” replied Ramona as a tall man with dark shoulder-length curly black hair took center stage with his guitar. 
            “Back off, he’s mine!  You can have the drummer!”
            Ramona’s eyes fell on the long-haired drummer as he started pounding out the rhythm of the first song.  “Hey, I know that guy!” said Ramona.
            “You do?  How?”
            “Well, I kind of know him.  His name’s Anderson.  He’s a friend of a friend…of a friend…kind of.”
            “Interesting!” Amy shouted over the loud music.  “He rocks!”
            “Yeah,” replied Ramona, “he does, doesn’t he?”
            As they played, Ramona couldn’t keep her eyes off of Anderson.  She had only met him once, maybe twice in the past.  She always had the impression that we was some kind of a Venice Beach hippie transient.  But seeing him up on stage with this band, he was the complete opposite.  He was focused, deliberate, sexy.  Ramona bit her bottom lip.  Maybe this night wouldn’t be a total loss for her after all.

            After the show, Ramona and Amy waited outside the venue for a chance to meet the band.  Ramona was still feeling tingly from how well they had performed, especially Anderson.  She couldn’t deny she even felt a little nervous.
            Amy spotted Dylan coming back from putting an amp in his car.  “Dylan!” she shouted.
            “Hey!  You came!  I thought I saw you in the crowd,” said Dylan as he leaned forward to give Amy a hug. 
            “I told you I would.  You guys were amazing.”
“Thank you so much.  Please excuse me, I’m so sweaty.” 
“It’s okay.  I like it!”
Dylan looked at Amy for a long moment.  “Your pictures on Cinder do not do you justice, girl. You are smokin’!”
            Amy blushed furiously.  “Thanks.  Um, Dylan, this is my friend Ramona,” she said, suddenly wanting to change the subject.
            Dylan looked at Ramona while offering his right hand to her.  “So nice to meet you.  Thank you for coming out to support us.”
            Ramona took his hand and replied, “It was so great, Dylan, really.  I actually know your drummer.”
            “Andy?  No shit?”  Ramona nodded.  “Well,” he added.  “We’re all headed back to my place to hang.  You girls definitely have to come.”
            “We’re in,” said Amy without hesitation.
            “Sweet,” replied Dylan.  “I’ll text you my address.

            A few hours (and several drinks) later, Ramona found herself in the backyard of Dylan’s beautiful Los Feliz home.  Ramona and Anderson were getting cozy beside each other in hammock while Amy and Dylan had disappeared somewhere inside.
            “It’s so rad that you’re here right now!  I can’t get over it!” said Anderson taking another sip from the bottle of beer he held in his hands.  “Every time I saw you out with Aaron and Liz I always thought you were such a fox.”
            Ramona laughed, flattered by his excitement.  “That’s crazy!  Why didn’t you ever ask me out?”
            “Hey, I’m shy.”
            Ramona laughed.  “Bull.  Shit.  I didn’t even know you played music,” she said.  “You’re such a rock star!”
            Anderson stopped smiling as his expression became more serious.  “There are a lot of things you don’t know about me, Miss Mona,” he said.
            Ramona raised one of her eyebrows.  “Is that so?”
            “Yes it is, but don’t worry.  You’re about to find out.” 
            Ramona felt those butterflies in her stomach again as he leaned closer and their lips met.  The spark between them was instant, something Ramona had not felt in too long.  Her body ached for it.  Before she knew it, they were tangled up in each other and he was unbuttoning her pants.  His large hands explored her inner thighs, gripped her hips, her ass. 
            “Are you on the pill?” he asked, breathlessly.  Ramona shook her head.  “That’s okay,” he added while pulling a condom from his front pocket.  “Rock stars always come prepared.”      

            Ramona’s smile grew even larger as she lost herself in total ecstasy.  She’d never done it in a hammock.